Revising

Many students go threw a process revising a paper to make it a good paper. When you compare rough draft to a final draft you can see the difference between the two and notice all the mistakes in both papers. No matter how many times you edit or revise a paper there still seems to find a error. I tend to not go to a tutor or have plenty people revise my papers. Normally I like to revise and edit my own paper because of the fact that it will only make sense to me and I like to find my own mistakes and make my own corrections. In my paper I found mistakes in my body paragraphs and having to organize my paper. My grammar is okay but I sometimes tend to have plenty of run-ons and , and fragments in my sentences, and I also had to add some descriptive to the sentences so that my paper can have more details to. After revising some of my mistakes were corrected but i still had some more corrections to make. Usually I revise my paper three or four times to make sure or that I am satisfy with what I have written I know that I still have some mistakes but with very few that I can pass with. I believe that me going to a tutor probably would be more advising and have me get more help but I seem to always be more confident and understood with writing and revising my own paper.

                                                       Turning in a "good" paper
Many students believe that turing in a good paper is a most. Students that think they are good at writing papers end up being the ones who make the most mistakes. Plenty of students spend hours and days revising and editing their papers and once they feel like their papers are good they turned them in to the teacher and the outcome isn what they expect it to be. So what makes a good paper that will satisfy you and your teacher? We as students all know it all depends on the time you put into your paper and how much effort you put into your paper. Revising and editing your paper is a must no matter how many times you have to keep going over your paper. Many ones have experience with writing a good and a bad paper and thats with all the errors,puncutations, grammer, and organization. Comparing and an A paper to an failing paper theyre is no comparison the only thing is no matter what there will always be mistakes in a paper even if you edit a paper one hundred times. To me there is never a good paper but there will always be a satisfying looking paper.

Literacy Narrative

• My first topic will be about how I struggled living without a father throughout my years. It was a shock to me knowing that my father was gone but it was not a clear view to me that he was really gone. I had a choice to either except that my father was gone or not. Most teens would really kill themselves over a family member and let their life go. Lucky that I have a supporting mother and she stood by my side the whole way. Unfortunately, my mother felt like she needed another man in her life to feel the love that she use to have with my father and I could not except that decision. However, The one man I accepted was my step father because he was the one to step up to the plate and take care of us and at the same time not and try and replace my father.

• My second topic will be about my transition between leaving high school and going into college. Dealing with the grades I had in high school made me believe that I was not gonna get into a good college. The grades that I had in high school were not that great and when I was applying to colleges I was not getting excepted to barely any colleges. However, I did get excepted to NEIU and had to accept it even though it was not my top option.

• My last topic will be about my nephew. My nephew grew up to a teen family. This has a big impact on me because knowing that my brother is a teen parent I have realized that being a teen and a parent is hard to manage. My nephew has a great family to look over him and as a aunt I have the position to stand up to the plate and take care of him as my own too. Many teen parents struggle and have their difficult times and when those times come I am the one to be there for my nephew and manage to take care of him at any point. Even though I am a young teen and go to school I still put out my time to take care of my nephew and have him with me at any time. Most teens would just go out and have fun and leave they're siblings handle their own issues. 

Why English 101

The reason why I am taking English 101 is because I had done well in my first semester in my English class. I speak for all because that is the reason why we are all here in this class except for the first year semester students. I believe that I have worked hard in order to get to this class and put in effort to be able to pass to this class. However, I believe that I can possibly gain more writing skills from this class than what I have already and knowing how to write more better on my papers.